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boyhamster junior member
Member # Joined: 02 Dec 2004 Posts: 8
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Posted: Sun Mar 13, 2005 12:11 am |
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Photoshop'n'Wacom.
Begging for C&Cs (mostly for critics, overpaints are allowed). My own critics are: insufficient details, poor and plain lighting, image needs more contrast, I suppose.
The bigger version of the image is here _________________ Is it better now? |
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DeadbeaT member
Member # Joined: 18 May 2003 Posts: 97 Location: Norway
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Posted: Sun Mar 13, 2005 2:52 pm |
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I think that propably the only reason this hasnt been commented yet is because its bigest flaw is that youve turned a consept that could be intresting, ecseptionally boring. Look at the tread "the fairy catcher" on the forum and notice how extremely detailed the faeries are, try to get the same level of detail in your picture, maybe then youll save some of its potential, also, post a bit larger and do something about textures and background _________________ DeadbeaT was here |
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boyhamster junior member
Member # Joined: 02 Dec 2004 Posts: 8
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Posted: Wed Mar 16, 2005 1:24 am |
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Background has always been the most difficult task for me, I simply do not know what to paint on it. (Or just maybe I'm too lazy for this. ) The same goes for the details. But I'll try to do something about it this time.
Thanks for the reply and advices, man. I really appreciate you care to write them down. _________________ Is it better now? |
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jinnseng member
Member # Joined: 07 Oct 2004 Posts: 100 Location: AZ
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Posted: Wed Mar 16, 2005 4:08 pm |
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To me it's not a very good composition. I think it needs more balance. Although I can kind of see what you might be going for with having a large dominating object on one side against the smaller figure, there isn't enough interest on the fairy side to make me really want to pay attention to it. There's a lot of unused space that really makes that side look too desolate. The figure on the right is interesting, but it totally dominates the piece. What can you do with it? Thats up to you, maybe it needs something in the background, maybe there can be more than one fairy. maybe add some contrasting colors. I really think you can turn this one out! I don't want to just sound like i'm bashing, but this is my initial observation of the piece. Good luck! |
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