[jinnseng]

Hi all, worked on this for a few times when I had time. I still have alot to learn. Comments or critiques are welcome.

[Heysoos]

well, the main thing you need to fix is that her torso is way too short, as if her body goes directly from ribs to ass with nothing between.
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[jinnseng]

Right, thanks for pointing that out. I went in and tried to correct it. Sick days are great, i have plenty of time to play around with this stuff.

[DeadbeaT]

I'd still say too short..
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[noxi]

I dont�t think there�s nothing wrong with the height of the torso. it�s just righ or right enough to be good.

i did a quick overpaint, hope you don�t mind. i think the torso may look like too short cos there�s not enough curves. so i added fev. i think looks a little better, but the height is just the same.

edit; ok, a bit too short...

[noxi]

damn, double post. delete this please.

[watmough]

way too short.

[jinnseng]

All the feedback is appreciated. I'm open to anything that can help me improve.
I've really looked it over, and i'm not sure if I see the shortness. It must be something else in my proportions that throws it off. Here's the ref I used.