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Feral member
Member # Joined: 23 Jun 2004 Posts: 67 Location: Nottingham,UK
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Posted: Mon Feb 07, 2005 10:30 am |
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Well its all done, not overly happy with it, but what the hey!
thanks to everyone that had some input.
C&C welcome
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Member # Joined: 24 Mar 2004 Posts: 294 Location: the New Mexico
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Posted: Mon Feb 07, 2005 11:53 am |
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nice jobl. compositionally, there is a slight problem that everything is going the same direction. Its like a big arrow all pointing to the bottom right side of the image and the viewers eyes inadvertantly tumble right out of the picture. And even though you tried to counter balance it with the direction of the mountains, as a whole they have a steps type effect that goes in the same direction as everything else (this would be helped if they weren't so uniform in size and shape). You might want to introduce some sort of design element that brings the viewers eyes back into the picture, which could be done in numerous ways like adding another allgitor man with his head turned towards the others, or bringing one the opposing guys closer, or something. You basically just want some sort of accent that points the viewer back towards the focal point of the guys in front. _________________ http://www.angelfire.com/art2/wfkeil |
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Member # Joined: 23 Jun 2004 Posts: 67 Location: Nottingham,UK
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Posted: Mon Feb 07, 2005 12:08 pm |
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What you say has some truth in it.
This is a box cover, so a game logo sits in the upper right space.
That and the text should alter the slanting problem.
Cheers
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Member # Joined: 09 Oct 2001 Posts: 1545 Location: Atlanta, GA
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Posted: Mon Feb 07, 2005 7:01 pm |
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Well done!! I followed through in the WIP, and I was most impressed with the finish - well done indeed! _________________ - Tom Carter
"You can't stop the waves but you can learn to surf" - Jack Kornfield |
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