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judson member
Member # Joined: 25 Jan 2004 Posts: 59 Location: Spain
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Posted: Mon Feb 07, 2005 2:46 pm |
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C&c are wellcomes.
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Max_Dark junior member
Member # Joined: 25 Apr 2004 Posts: 16
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Posted: Mon Feb 07, 2005 2:56 pm |
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Excellent piece, if I had to name anything that's bothering me it's the somewhat simple boots he's wearing. They seem so 2d. Nice focus on the action, nice colors |
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judson member
Member # Joined: 25 Jan 2004 Posts: 59 Location: Spain
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Posted: Mon Feb 07, 2005 3:16 pm |
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Thanx |
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1500miles junior member
Member # Joined: 27 Dec 2004 Posts: 11
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Posted: Thu Feb 10, 2005 3:18 pm |
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What stood out to me was the ice around the shark. Where it's (somewhat violently, I'm guessing) breaking apart, the ice seems...soft, almost. It has an almost rubberish appearance. I don't think it's completely necessary to fix it, it just stood out to me.
Otherwise, I really love it. The colors and mood and everything are really great. |
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Fiend member
Member # Joined: 28 Jun 2002 Posts: 270 Location: CPH - Denmark
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Posted: Sat Feb 12, 2005 3:41 pm |
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Here is some C&C, hope you can use it.
Nice colors but to me the image seem kind of strange. First of all the storytelling - why is he hunting a shark in the middle of a sea of ice (or in the middle of land) and why is the shark attacking. It needs an explanation for this - he could be lost on a piece of ice, hunting in a canoe with a huge chunk of meat hanging from a wire, etc.
The composition could need some tweaking as well. It's a dramatic situation; why not frame it a bit closer and twist the angle of the horizon. The two "characters" are kind of stuck in the middle of the picture, they could be levelled a bit more. You could also make his pose a bit more wild (he is being attacked by a quite large shark). Perhaps you could also lose some of the mountains on the left and make it look like the ocean. Hope it helps. _________________ Yeah man but it's a dry heat... |
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judson member
Member # Joined: 25 Jan 2004 Posts: 59 Location: Spain
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Posted: Sat Feb 12, 2005 5:13 pm |
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Thanx to both.
I must learn about perspective and composition, respect the storytelling I dont have explanations, I only draw an idea...
I must learn englis too excuse me |
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