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Tinusch
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 22, 2000 2:09 pm     Reply with quote
I did this pic for someone else at their request. Please let me know what's wreong with it. I know that 1) the angle is wrong, 2)the ankles are too thin, and 3) the hands suck. What else is wrong?

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DuKEZ
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 22, 2000 2:19 pm     Reply with quote
and the bar perspective is wrong

also in that position shes in.. shes gonna have a madd headache. cause.. of gravity

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PostPosted: Sat Jan 22, 2000 3:21 pm     Reply with quote
nothing is wrong with it! just say its made in style of Picasso and nobody is gonna even say anythign thats what i do

i can tell what is good though, the clothes on her hands is really perfect! looks like a photo to me if you've seen those gymnasts wearing those tight clothes ERR #(&^#(# whateverr i like the hands

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Muzman
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 22, 2000 3:22 pm     Reply with quote
I think you can pull it off, no prob. Most of it is fine; there's a lot of variety in human form after all (unless you aren't happy with it a'course)
The main things is that she goes 2d from the waist up!
depth is all ya need
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Cypher
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 22, 2000 11:40 pm     Reply with quote
Err... She looks like Olive Oil.
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micke
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 23, 2000 5:03 pm     Reply with quote
Generally it looks good.

The head looks kind'a weird
if you move the face closer to the neck it
would look better i think. also the toes look
a bit long on one of her feets.

-Micke

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tanis
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 24, 2000 12:45 am     Reply with quote
I agree with Muzman. It's way too much 2d.
But I like the style. It's a bit weird but the anatomy actually isn't wrong.

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