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P-Rik
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I wanted to finalize a speedpaint this evening...
Here is what i have... It seems to be ok for me with that one.
see U soon everybody...
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| Posted: Sun Jan 09, 2005 11:20 pm |
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| The left arm threw me off. If it was in that position, I think you would see the elbow and it would go down to right above the navel. I could be wrong though... |
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| Posted: Mon Jan 10, 2005 6:10 pm |
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The background is nice, but to my eye there are lots of problems with the girl. There's an awkward feel with the proportions and post, and her skin is way too dark for such a lumanecent scene.
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| Posted: Tue Jan 11, 2005 1:20 am |
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Thanks Sulma and Dhood! After your comments, y have rework on it...
update on top ...
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| Posted: Tue Jan 11, 2005 2:11 am |
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her upper body is too small for the lower body. AS reference, look at her ass. It's in proportion for the lower half of her body, but out of proportion for the top half of her body.making the upper body a bit higher and a bit wider would help the picture alot.
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| Posted: Tue Jan 11, 2005 2:24 am |
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Right! Thanks a lot faeklone !!! ^^
My Post is transforming to a WIP post ... sorry! ^^
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The Real Mark
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| Posted: Tue Jan 11, 2005 5:30 am |
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That looks awesome
will look awesome +10 once those things are fixed up. |
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| Posted: Tue Jan 11, 2005 8:40 am |
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Thanks ! ^^
Update...
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| Posted: Wed Jan 12, 2005 4:04 am |
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update again .... Ooops, forgot to flip the sign ^^
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| Posted: Wed Jan 12, 2005 4:17 am |
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| I like it, but I'm thinking maybe the overblown whites are a bit overdone? |
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| Posted: Fri Jan 14, 2005 5:27 am |
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Thanks Mr Lunatique !! You had right, The wings were really too withe...
It looks to be better now....
But there is always something strange with the head... I need more practice about anatomy!!
Thanks Luna! ^^
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| Posted: Sat Jan 15, 2005 6:47 pm |
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wow the river and the branches is really good
i like it
add some more, her right wing isn't as transparent as the left one
and yes, i think her arms are a bit too short |
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