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andreasrocha
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 01, 2005 11:46 am     Reply with quote
Practicing with hard-edged-rectangular-shaped brush in Photoshop. What I like most about this marker-like brush is the way you can color and define form at the same time. I didn't use any photo references, but maybe I should have. There are some anatomical issues and some areas lack muscle definition. Perhaps next time I'll use some refs.

Glad to hear what you think.
Thanks.

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zzaga
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 01, 2005 1:43 pm     Reply with quote
Nice work:)

Some things do strike me when looking at it...
The brests... if you put your arms up in the air your breast will be higher up as well...

Her left arm looks a little to "fat" incomparison to her right arm.
The base of her trought looks a little to wide as well..
Perhaps you sould have worked some more with her stockings? Softening them a little.

I't wasn't my entantion to diss you... the picture is realy great despite what I have said:D

/Z
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 01, 2005 7:23 pm     Reply with quote
Nicely done..

I can say that theres a breast issue going on.. the gap between her throat and breasts is too much.. that is the main thing that disturbs me...the breasts should have been up about half an inch (about 1,25 cm). measuring on that image:) but this time the torso would be lenghtened which would look odd, so the best way is to narrow down the space between throat and breasts..

looks nice and sexy:)
keep up...
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PostPosted: Tue Aug 09, 2005 7:46 am     Reply with quote
link broken...

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PostPosted: Tue Aug 09, 2005 8:04 am     Reply with quote
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PostPosted: Tue Aug 09, 2005 10:24 am     Reply with quote
of course it's from January.. Cool
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PostPosted: Tue Aug 09, 2005 12:29 pm     Reply with quote
ha ha ha ha ha... dint notice that... Smile
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PostPosted: Tue Aug 09, 2005 1:09 pm     Reply with quote
was just hoping he has permanent hosting somewhere I could view the finished piece...

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