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Morgorth
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hi guys im into digital painting and sketching for almost half a year now~but i cant seem to get compostion well~i understand tat is a crucial element in any character and scene design~can u guys pls help me by giving me any tips as general or simply on tis piece on how to maximise e dynamics ?thanks i wil appreciate alot~
tis jus a quick sketch off my tablet~wanna learn Compositing argh!
Edit: pls see e pic on tis link thanks!~but strangely i can see the pic myself~http://www.deviantart.com/view/14383779/
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Naeem
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| Posted: Sat Jan 22, 2005 11:36 am |
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Morgorth
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| Posted: Sat Jan 22, 2005 8:06 pm |
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hey thanks anish~i wil post another one~ya
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Morgorth
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| Posted: Sun Jan 23, 2005 8:01 am |
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er~hello can anyone help pls? or is it tat hard for tis piece? ;(
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afex
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| Posted: Sun Jan 23, 2005 1:43 pm |
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Here you go, mirrored.
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afex
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| Posted: Sun Jan 23, 2005 1:50 pm |
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As for comments...
a few things i think need to change
First, I don't think the spiderweb (if thats what it is) should be in the image at all. It doesn't seem to serve any purpose
Second, his hand holding the girl, it think it would look better if you put his hand a little higher and spread his fingers out a little, that way you can see the girl through the spaces in his fingers.
And finally, something is bothering me with his legs, his right leg (our left) seems to high, it seems like he body should be a little higher.
one more thing, where is the monsters genetals? I mean, doesn't a beast man get some love sometimes? |
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