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Topic : "the return of da funky guy" |
Taho
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 Posted: Tue Dec 21, 2004 3:54 pm |
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hello again guys, thanks for the previous crits and comments, here is another version of my funky guy after dealing properly with the colors, i guess now it should look right... 
by the way here is the previous version just in case...
again crits and comments are gladly welcomed!
c ya all!
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sedgemonkey
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| Posted: Wed Dec 22, 2004 9:14 am |
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I like what you've got going so far. The pose, the face, the character all look good.
Couple crits...
The spotty lights looks a bit odd on the character. They seem to be just flat circles -- they don't form to his body.
The piece feels a bit "flat". Maybe you could bump up the highlights in a few places.
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