[Sukhoi]

Update below......


I clearly need humans in my images. This is getting ridiculous. However I liked this one and thought that would ask for some oppinions.
Tell me what it's lacking please, and I will compare your statements to my own ideas, too see if I'm feeling this right. Thanks in advance.

(@Capt. Fred: It'll be interesting to see if people think the "story" sucks, haha;) )
(Og ja, Champ, det ER en formation af stealth fly oppe i himlen)

Sukhoi

[Max]

Let me be the first on to comment on this cool image!
First off, very nice job man. I see alot of improvement in your style and technique. The only thing that bothers me is the bright sky. It's kinda empty. I am not a pro concerning lightning but if it was that bright, the foreground would be more silhuette like I think.
I really like the buildings though. Very nice design.
Keep it up!!!

edit: Oh, and the perspective is truly awesome, I nearly forgot to mention it.

[balistic]

The shape of the aircraft could probably use some elaboration . . . wasn't sure what I was looking at at first. Also I'm getting mixed signals about the scale of the gun . . . maybe some birds perched on it somewhere might help define the size relationship to the viewer.

Lighting is good though, and I like the palette.
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[weaselball2]

thats a crazy cool viewing angle

[jinnseng]

The structure is a little confusing to me. The mood and feeling I get is like it's a scene out of a Patlabor or Gundam anime, which i'm a fan of. I'm digging the picture, it's just a little fuzzy for me.

[daryl]

apart from what has been said, I really like this. the values are striking, great job!
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[Sukhoi]

Max:
I did the image "as seen through a camera". Thus if you are able too see whats in the shadow, the sky is likely too be all white. If done as seen through the eye, you would be right I think.
Thanks.

Balistic:
Thanks, and yeah, You're right. It's still a problem though. I tried to make some walkways and stuff to explain the size, because birds or people aren't much good from this angle. Regarding the planes, I have to disagree. It's supposed to be ultra minimalistic stealth aircraft. Therefore the graphic appearance.

Weasel:
Thanks. Pretty hard though, and propably riddled with errors. But I'm too blind to spot them by now.

Jinnseng:
Fuzzy, Tjeck!
I tried to fix it without loosing all the funk.

DARYL:
Thanks

UPDATE:



Sukhoi

[balistic]

The catwalk on the left helps the scale issue. And by a tail for the planes, I just meant the little sort of duck tail that a B2 has. Regardless, they aren't a dealbreaker. It's a cool piece.
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[jinnseng]

That really is looking better. It's nice how the structure has cleared up. Only thing is, what are the "L" shaped objects in the sky?

[The Insane Lemur]

real nice, im wondering what the L shaped objects are too

[Sukhoi]

Balistic:
Yeah, shure I know what you mean. The stealth aircraft were supposed to be for the people who know the B2, yet I didn't want to do an actual one.

Jinsnseng and Lemur:
"L" = future B2, as said

Apperently they fu*k things up as most of you can't see what the hell they are supposed to be. But I'll definately let them stay, excactly because of that.

Thanks a lot people.

[Popeye]

that's really good! i like your design too!

[B3AND1P]

I love the look but the crane thing on the right is kind of confusing to me. The wood at the end of the cable looks really far away, but the structure it is attached to looks really close. At first I thought the crane was a canon on a tank and we were looking up at a normal sized tank.
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