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ozan
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 Posted: Thu Dec 02, 2004 5:13 pm |
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im mostly concerned with compostion at this point. and with color. how does it look to you? anytthing bug you about the way the eye is lead throughout? thanks.
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Naeem
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| Posted: Fri Dec 03, 2004 2:28 am |
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| i think its pretty satisfactory. im loving the colors and the background and the foreground. composition is great. ur eye first hits the center n then travels around the piece from first going to the bottom right, then the top left ogres and the top right ogres. then it travels to the bg. just awesome. i love the mood n characters and color! promising piece u've got here. |
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dhood
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| Posted: Fri Dec 03, 2004 6:20 am |
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| I like it. Im not to sure about the way the ogre/orc guy is holding the axe though. |
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| Posted: Fri Dec 03, 2004 7:27 am |
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this is nice,ozan,but, since you asked about the composition..
its unsettling,that hard diagonal running from lower bottom right leaves my eye at a dead end,and doesnt really want to come back.the overall effect is still chaotic,though, making me not really see the guy in the bottom right corner.
he feels kind of seperate.
but,as i said ,it is very nicely painted,and since you asked,i gave it to ya 
(yeah the hand is wierd on the axe,maybe change it to palm up?)
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ozan
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| Posted: Fri Dec 03, 2004 8:21 am |
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hey, thanks everyone. gald you like it, for the most part.
watmough, that issue is the reason i posted it. some people are bothered by the guy at the bottom of the frame and some arent. i'm going to try a few things. thanks again!
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faB
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| Posted: Fri Dec 03, 2004 8:49 am |
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I think the frontmost bad guy (facing away) looks still compared to the other ones coming from the distance, otherwise it's great. Like, reading from the top the enemy and the fight is incoming, reading from the bottom the enemy IS there. Just a random idea that may or may not work : what if the sword guy looks more towards the viewer, suggesting something coming from there, but not visible in the frame yet.
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