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PostPosted: Thu Oct 21, 2004 8:58 pm     Reply with quote
c&c welcome
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 22, 2004 6:17 am     Reply with quote
I like it. the background is surely rather abstract I must say, but it tickles with fantasy. nice style and lighting, nothing to crit really. keep it up.
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PostPosted: Sat Oct 23, 2004 7:13 am     Reply with quote
Thanks a lot Daryl! hmmm... Maybe the sub got too detailed compared to the rest?
But there must be stuff to criticize.. So.. criticize, please!
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PostPosted: Sat Oct 23, 2004 8:09 pm     Reply with quote
everything seems to have very direct and distinct and direct shadows except for the girl... her body seems ok but the face just doesn't fit...it needs more distinctions in the eyes, cheeks and nose...it's like a cartoon in a realistic world...i really dig the background tho...especially the rust on the metallic structure...keep going with it
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PostPosted: Sun Oct 24, 2004 12:29 am     Reply with quote
Good work, I like the image.
Other than what's already been said I noticed two things:

Her face seems a bit burned out, like you overdid it with a screen/overlay brush. Don't know if this is intentional or not.

I think the picture would look better if it was cropped a little tigher, especially on the right side (now there is nothing) and the top (just crop off the top of the sub), leave something for the imagination.

Just some thoughts, other than that, great work!
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PostPosted: Sun Oct 24, 2004 2:35 pm     Reply with quote
Thanks, insider! Ah, I see what you mean with the girl, good point.

buzzz3d: Glad you liked it. Oh... I changed the contrast/brightness quite drastically halfway... didn't compensate for that on the girl Embarassed
Aye, I'll experiment a bit with the cropping.

Thanks a lot guys!
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