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Misc member
Member # Joined: 04 Jun 2004 Posts: 475 Location: Sweden
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Posted: Thu Oct 21, 2004 8:58 pm |
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c&c welcome
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daryl member
Member # Joined: 28 Oct 2000 Posts: 441 Location: Stockholm, Sweden
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Posted: Fri Oct 22, 2004 6:17 am |
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I like it. the background is surely rather abstract I must say, but it tickles with fantasy. nice style and lighting, nothing to crit really. keep it up. |
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Member # Joined: 04 Jun 2004 Posts: 475 Location: Sweden
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Posted: Sat Oct 23, 2004 7:13 am |
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Thanks a lot Daryl! hmmm... Maybe the sub got too detailed compared to the rest?
But there must be stuff to criticize.. So.. criticize, please! |
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the_insider member
Member # Joined: 06 Apr 2002 Posts: 547 Location: DENVER COLORADO--rocky mountains whoo hoo!!
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Posted: Sat Oct 23, 2004 8:09 pm |
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everything seems to have very direct and distinct and direct shadows except for the girl... her body seems ok but the face just doesn't fit...it needs more distinctions in the eyes, cheeks and nose...it's like a cartoon in a realistic world...i really dig the background tho...especially the rust on the metallic structure...keep going with it _________________ www.andresguzman.com
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buzzz3d member
Member # Joined: 10 Mar 2004 Posts: 134
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Posted: Sun Oct 24, 2004 12:29 am |
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Good work, I like the image.
Other than what's already been said I noticed two things:
Her face seems a bit burned out, like you overdid it with a screen/overlay brush. Don't know if this is intentional or not.
I think the picture would look better if it was cropped a little tigher, especially on the right side (now there is nothing) and the top (just crop off the top of the sub), leave something for the imagination.
Just some thoughts, other than that, great work! |
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Member # Joined: 04 Jun 2004 Posts: 475 Location: Sweden
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Posted: Sun Oct 24, 2004 2:35 pm |
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Thanks, insider! Ah, I see what you mean with the girl, good point.
buzzz3d: Glad you liked it. Oh... I changed the contrast/brightness quite drastically halfway... didn't compensate for that on the girl
Aye, I'll experiment a bit with the cropping.
Thanks a lot guys! |
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