[SekiRyuu]

this is a simple sketch i did: i didnt do the decals cause i suck at drawing stars and it got somewhat discolored when i took the photo, so the blur on the left landing gear is just light reflecting off or something


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[B0b]

hmm, try using a grid to copy poto's, your perspective is way off..

good attempt all the same

[SekiRyuu]

how is my perspective off? thats what it looks like on the reference photo (except it has more details and the nose is a little thinner/fatter....cant remember which)
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[B0b]

never seen a F2H-3 Banshee all i can go on is what i found on google..



in this pic the front of the aircraft looks long and slender.. in your's it looks short and stubby..

have you got the ref u used?

[Capt.FlushGarden]

*constructive crits missile missed target*

[SekiRyuu]

and on the stars, how do u add perspective to show its wrapped around the nose? and the nose was somewhat fat in the reference pic, but i think i over did it a bit too much......

plus, on that drawing stuff, i draw differently than most ppl: i cant do that skeleton outline, then erase around the outline, then make the full plane, then make the details and shading; i just go right to the point and sketch it line by line as it is in the pic btw, heres the reference i used:




oooo i see now, the nose aint lined up with the tail
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[jinnseng]

The nose/front of the plane looks like a different shape then the references picture. On your drawing it looks kind of "fat". It's a good start though, if you can correct that part it will look even better.

[SekiRyuu]

well, its not a completely different shape....its just distorted
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[B0b]

[SekiRyuu]

what i meant by distorted was fat and not aligned......its stilll the same basic shape

and i use a mechanical pencil cause regular pencils piss me off......i have to keep sharpening them and i dont have a sharpener; therfore no regular pencils
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[Capt.FlushGarden]

*constructive crits missile missed target*

[SekiRyuu]

well, i do most of my drawings in about an hour.....i tried one skeleton thing from a drawing book and it took the same amount of time
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[helltaxi]

less excuses, more listening. You wont improve until you learn to do a proper lay in, as opposed to starting with the fine details. Start light, with basic shapes. Good luck.

[SekiRyuu]

i cant do that unless i have a step by step instruction on that exact plane....i have a disorder that keeps me from going "outside of the box" one might say....im a linear thinker (i think thats what its called) so i go strait to the point and screw the useless crap
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[Wagner]

[SekiRyuu]

no, i have asburgers u fucking asshole

and saying that i have asburgers is admitting that i have a fault dumbass
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