[monjo]

Hello all. I've been admiring everyones work here for sometime now and got up the courage to show a few of the paintings that I'm working on. Any comments or suggestions for improvements on any of them will be greatly appreciated

[stacy]

You should take some drawing and painting classes.
Not because your work is bad.
On the contrary.
With some professional training, you could be a
darn good painter.

Not that being a perfectionist at perspective and
learning to render volume is the end all be all.

The still life at the top has just a hint
of cubist distortion that's intriguing.

With the one exception of the 'out of the
tube' orange for the bus, I also like
your pallette very much.

They're not great paintings, but they're
really good paintings.

Take some classes.


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Oh yes, ...and a BIG compliment on
your subject matter.
It's refreshing to see something besides
'space-monsters', 'vampires', and copied
comic-book characters.