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P-Rik · Posted: Thu Sep 30, 2004 3:04 pm

Final or not...
Something dosn't seems ok about colours or lighting... I dont know.
I'm going to lost it some days to have a fresh better point of view about it.

Anyway, this is for printing.

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Capt. Fred · Posted: Thu Sep 30, 2004 3:12 pm

I agree, colours and lighting are a bit funny (odd), but I like all the stuff that's going on. I might have to do a quick paint over, so i can make a better assessment� if u don't mind :)

P-Rik · Posted: Thu Sep 30, 2004 3:18 pm

No Pb... Overpaints are ok for me!
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Capt.FlushGarden · Posted: Thu Sep 30, 2004 4:09 pm

Hey that's a finished one from the speed thread huh!? i love the mood! and that fantastic blue hair, wish girls could have that sometimes hehehe...

first tip/trick, that u might know of, that u can mirror the picture, this will make your eye react to stuff it has already got used to. i flipped your image, and saw that the face was a bit strange and the pose maybe a bit stiff??!+, im not very good at characters tho Sad

also the white light is a nice thought, but i think maybe you thought it was so nice you kept on adding it, and in the end its too much, so with this little overpaint i try to explain what I'm saying here hehe, I thought the image looked better flipped cause she's looking towards the upper left corner and i only kept the white light in a line down towards the right corner, and removed the white from the wings and hair cause something tells me that color doesnt react to white light like that, i dunno tho , better let someone else tell u how that works... also i kinda flipped her arm, cause women has wierd joints so that sometimes it looks like their arm is backwards, men dont have that as much and thats why they can throw things better Razz

also i added some cheekbones and made her head slope a bit more in the forehead, Oh and i darkened the upper right corner too, so that it leads the eye to a better "swoosh" form top left to bottom right...

hope it helps m8 keep up the good work!

P-Rik · Posted: Thu Sep 30, 2004 4:29 pm

Wow !!

Thank You for this helpfull comment!!
Excellent about the arms-hands rotation. Looks really better!
More bground and less ligt is a nice idea too...
So Much good informations...

I will rework on it soon !!

Great Thanks about that overpaint!
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P-Rik · Posted: Fri Oct 01, 2004 4:27 am

New version! Update... :p
I'm gone in another direction... Just a bit more dynamic!
Wind and surprise added... And the Butterflies are more present due to her surprising face....

Harg... hard to explain in English!

Great thanks Capt.FlushGarden !!!
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Capt.FlushGarden · Posted: Fri Oct 01, 2004 6:33 am

ooh nice update m8! looks a ton better!! Smile

Misc · Posted: Fri Oct 01, 2004 7:06 am

P-Rik, that looks very good! The strokes seem to have been placed so effortlessly, and it fits so well with the motive. Like it alot!

Nice and informative overpaint Capt.Flush.

P-Rik · Posted: Fri Oct 01, 2004 7:22 am

Thanks Misc !!

By this painting, i have tried to find the best way to finish My speedpaint.
I need to practice more n more !!

Capt.FlushGarden >> You are a Great Illustrator!! some of your pic are in my personal "inspiration" folder.

Glad you like it!
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Odds · member Member # Joined: 17 Sep 2004 Posts: 374

awesome piece Smile

i love how illuminated and glowing this scene is... it's so angelic
great job on the colors

Capt.FlushGarden · Posted: Sun Oct 03, 2004 12:28 pm

aww R-Rik, Embarassed

its always an honour being in someones inspiration folder Razz