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Toker
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 18, 2004 1:48 pm     Reply with quote
sup folks

picture in progress here, C&C welcome

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PostPosted: Mon Oct 18, 2004 9:37 pm     Reply with quote
Looks like you have a nice start. The most noticable thing to me is his neck is too thick on the side where the ear hasn't been finished. If you chop it down it will look better. The neck should be coming down from where the ear ends, like you have on the other side. Another thing I noticed is the ear that you did fill in, it looks kind of like it is sticking out too much. Like someone is pulling it out. It should be flattened a little bit more against the side of the head. Surprised
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Toker
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 18, 2004 11:43 pm     Reply with quote
Thanks for your comment!
I don't agree with you though, I would normally, but since he's a wrestler I don't. They have broad necks and "pulled out"-ears Wink

This is the sketch i did with pen and paper:

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PostPosted: Tue Oct 19, 2004 2:04 am     Reply with quote
nice work - eyes are a bit too close together.
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Toker
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 19, 2004 2:49 am     Reply with quote
Yeah you're right, i'll try to correct that.

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PostPosted: Tue Oct 19, 2004 2:52 am     Reply with quote
Uhm... Rolling Eyes

Better/worse?

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