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Topic : "MY FIRST PIECE UP FOR REVIEW" |
fathomsforty junior member
Member # Joined: 14 Sep 2004 Posts: 3
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Posted: Thu Sep 23, 2004 6:06 pm |
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hi.
the photographer, told me I could do anything I wanted to it, and this is what I saw in my head, I showed it to him and he loves it except he doesn''t care for from his knees down and I agree. So any suggestions and critiques would make me very happy.
thank you.
-heather
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makototaramoto member
Member # Joined: 15 Apr 2002 Posts: 135 Location: NY
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Posted: Thu Sep 23, 2004 6:25 pm |
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well i think that it might work better if the 'smoke' was more transparent like a fog or a mist...also you might be able to crop the picture to eliminate dead space which is on the top...im assuming the feat are causing the even yet from the picture it is hard to say if he is wearing shoes,or sneakers _________________ mercer |
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fathomsforty junior member
Member # Joined: 14 Sep 2004 Posts: 3
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Posted: Mon Sep 27, 2004 3:42 pm |
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Thanks for the comment |
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Novacaptain member
Member # Joined: 09 Jan 2001 Posts: 906 Location: Sweden
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Posted: Fri Oct 01, 2004 8:30 pm |
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It looks like he has a stubby little tail
The negtive shape just made it seem that way. _________________ It's nice to be important, but more important to be nice - Scooter |
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