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Meaty Ogre
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PostPosted: Thu Sep 16, 2004 4:04 pm     Reply with quote
This one started out strong then got harder and harder to work on. Maybe I should keep stabing at it. Hows the composition look?



The next two I got paid for. yahoo!





Thanks for looking. Oh, I put a new graphic on the front of my site. What do you think of it? www.ozanart.com
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spyroteknik
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PostPosted: Thu Sep 16, 2004 4:15 pm     Reply with quote
all mighty fine, refined and slick, enjoying the first one, composition looks good to me, it'd look really good if the ghost's right arm (our left) was a little darker like his body, it'd make him seem more knitted in with the lighting, and if it were mine i'd possibly desaturate the yellow/green on the big fella's shoulders a bit to bring focus to the hyperdetailed chest more, just untrained observations though, only things i can think of that'd improve it more than it is, top drawer meaty
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Meaty Ogre
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PostPosted: Fri Sep 17, 2004 6:51 pm     Reply with quote
hey, thanks for your thoughts!

i think that's my first "top drawer".
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Odds
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PostPosted: Fri Sep 17, 2004 6:59 pm     Reply with quote
i wish i knew how to do coloring/blending as well as you <_<
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marc_taro
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PostPosted: Sat Sep 18, 2004 5:41 pm     Reply with quote
Nice work on your site - I think the composition's fine - I like the strong central figure...only thing I'd comment on - the yellow shoulder pads seem too dominant to me. They;re kind of a huge colored shape in a pretty muted image - might be just me...also might be cool if there wer more of those freaky white guys dancing around...like they worship that big dude...lol - anyway - great work..

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Max_Dark
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PostPosted: Sun Sep 19, 2004 1:10 pm     Reply with quote
The last two look like artwork for Magic cards. (That's a compliment by the way, I dunno if I just said something dead wrong Smile It's just the style seems very alike and it wouldn't look bad on them.)
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