[Reakshun]

'ello all. Been doing vis-dev for my "little" cartoon for the past month and this "council" piece is stumping me. Some have told me that it looks more like a flier for a hip hop concert than a design for a room. I agree somewhat. But, what I am trying to convey is there is a library of catalogued vinyl around these DJ's 24-7.

So without divulging too much info...here's what I came up with. maybe I just need a different angle...colors...design...who knows. Tear it up.



Oh, if any of you look at the OLD cartoon...trust me...we're LIGHT YEARS ahead of that now.

[makototaramoto]

does kinda look like some kind of hip-hop promotion,anyway i think you should kill tht 12" thats on the bottom right. I don't know if its a motion blur but it is out of focus and the 12 right across form it has great detail...if anything the bottom right 12" should be in more detail if you didn't want to kill it. I just realized there is more than one dj and not just the one in the middle...you need add more contrast to them so they stand out. I dont really understand the function of the beam in the middle the dark dj in the middle is ruining the composition since my yes goes ther and pretty much stays there. The white text or just the text in general is working against the piece...i think that the 12" with covers should face the other way where the circle cut out it is.....but that is all what i think
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