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Sukhoi · Posted: Wed Aug 25, 2004 10:01 am

Whew!

Exams are over and life begins once again. Here is a sci-fi thing I did a couple of months ago and some random crawler I've done post-summer.
Off to a hard start but practice makes perfect, so if you ahve any critizism, Id love to hear it.
I've been away from the drawing board for a while.

(obviously inspired by sploobe.....and it looks a bit Arne/ANJ aswell.....I'm not shure how I feel about this one, really. But as it's the first thing I've done for a long time and I thought I'd show it, and perhaps get some pointers from the crowd)

Good to be back!!!! Smile

Sukhoi

ax--hv · member Member # Joined: 08 Dec 2003 Posts: 349

Very spectacular, great brushwork & textures!
There are some bugs imo, which are minor.. for example perspective in 2-nd one seems to be wrong, so it can't help the feeling of 3D (as it probably was designed)
Great work however Smile

iandredd · member Member # Joined: 04 Jul 2002 Posts: 178

These are great! the first one is one of those ideas that leads one to exclaim "I wish I'd thought of that."

g a m m o n · member Member # Joined: 15 Jul 2003 Posts: 55

Very sweet. I really enjoy that city scape, it has a high energy atmoshpere. Its well composed to boot. Nice one.

The neon lights remind me of Homeworld 2.

Sumaleth · Posted: Wed Aug 25, 2004 10:36 pm

Perspective doesn't look right on the top of the tall building in the first pic, but apart from that minor quibble I really love both pics.
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Sukhoi · Posted: Thu Aug 26, 2004 11:50 pm

ax--hv: Thanks. Yeah I couldn't quite figure it out. The crawler was drawn freehand without planning as sort of a stressreleaser. No 3d if that's what you mean.

iandredd: Haha, thanks. What's the grat idea though?

gammon: Glad you like it. I kinda like it too, whitch is why I posted it, hehe. "neo lights"? Do you mean the yellow streaks in the air? It was intended to be a mix between timelapse photography and self illuminating plastic....

Suma: Hmnm, I don't see that......annoying. I do see the crap perspective/presence situation in the second one. Which I'm working on now.

Thanks guys.

Now, to make a pictures which actually interesting in some way, and not just "a robot" or "a future city" hahaha.

Sukhoi

The Insane Lemur · member Member # Joined: 19 Oct 2003 Posts: 768

like that cityscape alot, makes me wonder what the humongous building is for.

math · Posted: Sat Aug 28, 2004 6:53 am

traffic control center maybe...
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