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deadskies
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 Posted: Tue Aug 03, 2004 7:49 am |
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Hi all. I happened across this forum today and am impressed with the range of skill represented here.
I'm looking for more critique of my work as well as suggestions for growth (particularly in my color paintings.)
Here's one I just finished last week:
and please check out my online gallery if you have time/desire.
http://www.sleepforthedreaming.com/allFlatList.aspx
best,
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aphelionart
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| Posted: Tue Aug 03, 2004 9:28 am |
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| crazy, cool style.. it might've been your intention... but maybe some less outlining in the guy behind her? the right neck part bothers me... i think maybe it's cuz you can't see the trapezius.. |
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shambles
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Location: CA
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| Posted: Tue Aug 03, 2004 9:37 am |
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Very cool. The style does vary quite a bit between the two characters, but I like how you juxtaposed the freakish and the beautiful.. she doesn't seem to mind it at all.
Nice site by the way. Those movie poster spoofs cracked me up... "who stole my pants?" lol. |
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Greensun
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Location: Almere, Netherlands
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| Posted: Tue Aug 03, 2004 12:19 pm |
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oh, I simply LOVE it!  the surrealism is......Tasty! 
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IDrawGirls
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| Posted: Tue Aug 03, 2004 12:41 pm |
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Very nice style and concept.
I was going to write no crits but ...
maybe the background could be a little less distracting. The guy would pop more ...
and I think it is not supposed to look as if a huge hand is touching her boobs!?
Or is it? |
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Misc
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Location: Sweden
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| Posted: Thu Aug 05, 2004 5:03 am |
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WOW! Love your pictures. Lots of atmosphere, and lots of crazy ideas!  |
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