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Heysoos
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PostPosted: Thu Jun 24, 2004 11:57 am     Reply with quote
This ones just about done. Theres a few parts still bothering me though. If you have any feedback or advice I'd be happy to hear it.



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Bars
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PostPosted: Thu Jun 24, 2004 12:02 pm     Reply with quote
Good work so far! Is this forest on left or rain with clouds? If its rain, you should work more on it - right now it doesnt look like rain to me, and clouds too. They look like glued to painting, find some reference for clouds. I love the colors, contrast between yellow-orange ground and incoming storm. Keep it up! Smile
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PostPosted: Thu Jun 24, 2004 12:08 pm     Reply with quote
thanks. yeah its rain. all the contrast and differentions within it that makes it look kinda funky has become much more apparent to me since I put it on my computer. I'll try to fix it up, and the clouds too. Thanks alot.
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PostPosted: Thu Jun 24, 2004 1:38 pm     Reply with quote
thats good, i love how the light is coming down preceding the storm
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PostPosted: Tue Jul 06, 2004 1:38 pm     Reply with quote
cool contrast and strokes!!!
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PostPosted: Fri Jul 09, 2004 12:11 pm     Reply with quote
thanks a lot for the comments Insane Lemur and Bellas. I've been working on it a bit more, I'll try to get the updated version up soon.
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PostPosted: Fri Jul 09, 2004 5:25 pm     Reply with quote
fantastic use of oils..

very emotive
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