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asf1r
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These sketches are very nice, with a few minor problems. Basically, each character is proportionate, so that's good, but the way they're standing, they look kind of stiff. Also the feet need to have a lot of work done, especially when the foot is facing completely forward (since we can see the top of their heads, why can't we see the tops of their feet at all? are we looking at the character while lying on the ground? I would say no). I would just study some comic art for an hour or two, your friend will learn how to do feet a bit better in no time, since he is obviously talented.
Anyway, I hope this little critique helps, its a very nice drawing and I could go on and on about how nice it is, but that wouldnt be very helpful would it 
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| Posted: Wed Jan 05, 2000 8:34 am |
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Tnx for review ScOOp ! Eugeniy is a fan of Conan, so he always draw heroes, orcs or monsters with swords or smth. But when he draw a human he make a lot of mista�es - the people turn out not proportional BTW : I always speak to him about feet. They are not realistic.
And tell what do you think about my pics on this page
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| Posted: Wed Jan 05, 2000 8:34 am |
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And I saw ur works ScOOP. They are cool !
I love manga or anime pics
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