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EraserX
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Nathan
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Cool stuff!
I especially like the first one. |
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| Posted: Wed Jul 14, 2004 12:01 pm |
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| Nathan wrote: |
Cool stuff!
I especially like the first one. |
Yeah, he's real hot!!! 
seriously, these are pretty nice.
Maybe abit stiff, work on the "flow".
Other than that!
Nice and relaxed style!
keep it up
cheers
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| Posted: Thu Jul 15, 2004 6:52 am |
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Thanks for the comments guys!
Allpetter: That's something I've had trouble with for quite some time. Any time I try to keep mildly realistic anatomy, I end up making it stiff without reference. I'm working on it though. 
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stacy
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| Posted: Tue Jul 20, 2004 10:58 am |
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I like the third piece. It has more rhythm and there's a nice counterpoint between the flow of the lines and the strength of the figure. In terms of your base mechanical skills I think it's the best one.
However your stylized, "chiseled" technique is quite distinct and probably very much "you", and could work very well in splashy "pop" pieces. Like a high energy ad campaign for, say, Jetski's 'fer instance. With lots of action, danger and bright primary and secondary colors!!!
Do more open hands not clenched and try rendering your figures in action poses. And work on your eyes more.
Other than that, over all they're very very nice pieces. |
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PyroX
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| Posted: Tue Jul 20, 2004 4:13 pm |
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They're all nice I waish i could come up with stuff like that off the top of my head but I dont kow theres like a block on the details when I do it.
Overall there good  |
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Warhead82
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| Posted: Tue Jul 27, 2004 8:46 am |
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good stuff
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