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P-Rik
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 Posted: Fri Jun 18, 2004 11:32 am |
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Hey all !
New one!
Try to done a fresh n dynamic picture...
Cheers!
The speedpaint :
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desmozgenes
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| Posted: Fri Jun 18, 2004 12:06 pm |
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wow I love the grass very much! VERY nicely done!
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| Posted: Fri Jun 18, 2004 3:40 pm |
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It is nice and pretty fresh looking.  All I have to say is that the hair could use a little more consideration. Hair, especially litte kid hair, tends to be a little more clumpy than in your picture. The strands stick and consequently move together a little--it's not just every strand for itself.
I also think that, given the smooth line of the hem, you wouldn't see so many dramatic wrinkles in her skirt. If the dress is twisting around her waist, it would be a little more bunched as it gets thrown against itself in the motion. On the other hand, if you want it to look like it's being blown open like a parachute, then consider removing the wrinkles.
Either way, nice job. I love the "oh my god,, a butterfly!" look on her face.  It's really age-appropriate, and that's usually the hardest thing about drawing kids. Beautiful grass, too. |
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Depha4
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| Posted: Sat Jun 19, 2004 10:26 am |
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| bagelguillotine wrote: |
It is nice and pretty fresh looking. All I have to say is that the hair could use a little more consideration. Hair, especially litte kid hair, tends to be a little more clumpy than in your picture. The strands stick and consequently move together a little--it's not just every strand for itself.
I also think that, given the smooth line of the hem, you wouldn't see so many dramatic wrinkles in her skirt. If the dress is twisting around her waist, it would be a little more bunched as it gets thrown against itself in the motion. On the other hand, if you want it to look like it's being blown open like a parachute, then consider removing the wrinkles.
Either way, nice job. I love the "oh my god,, a butterfly!" look on her face. It's really age-appropriate, and that's usually the hardest thing about drawing kids. Beautiful grass, too. |
says it all : ) |
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aphelionart
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| Posted: Mon Jun 21, 2004 11:11 pm |
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it's nice, but i have to say i like the speedpaint a lot more than the final, actually! seems like that's the case a lot.. compare the rendering/shadows... the forms are more flat in the final, especially in the right arm/face, and the foot now seems like it's attached/parallel to the leg, not like it's coming towards us. also the shadow under the dress got lost.. it probably wouldn't be too hard to fix it though, since you had it all worked out in the initial sketch! fun stuff anyways..
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P-Rik
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| Posted: Tue Jun 22, 2004 11:35 pm |
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Really Great thanks to all of us.
What is nice on this forum is the fact that each of the comments are soo informational.
Ok, I will re-work on it soon.... new post later!
Anyway, thank you guys !!
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