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lightchaser
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Hello, I'm 16 years old, new to this forum and trying to make my way to the business. You can check out my site if you have nothing better to do. 
Here's my latest, they were made w/ ink on A4 and coloured in Photoshop 7.
For a friend:
And just for fun:
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lightchaser
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| Posted: Tue Jun 22, 2004 12:37 pm |
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Comments and constructive critisism would be highly appreciated!
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| Posted: Tue Jun 22, 2004 3:26 pm |
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| It looks nice. I like your style, especially the accentuated hips/legs. The only crits I have are these: the girl in the first picture's feet are a little unnecessarily small. Also, the guy's head is a little small, despite his hairstyle. Looks nice--I love that mohawk! |
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| Posted: Tue Jun 22, 2004 7:38 pm |
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| a couple things: the face of the woman seems a bit too manly. The guys head seems a bit to small on the top, the eyes should be about in the middle of the head and not near the top. For future things I think it would be very helpful to have some sort of reference especially for stuff like folds in clothing and anatomy. Hope I helped. |
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lightchaser
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| Posted: Wed Jun 23, 2004 12:49 am |
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I'll notice these next time I'll be drawing. Thankyou, you've been most helpful.
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