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eyewoo
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 Posted: Sat Jun 19, 2004 6:55 am |
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hi phil
I'm always enjoying your childbook illustration and even I like this two I have to admit that these are not the stronegst I've seen from you so far.
I think everything works fine, nothing to crit there though something is missing I cannot put my finger on-sorry
the only constructive criticism I can give to you is about the text.
-Not the content it's the typography aspect I'm talking about.
I'm doing this in school right now for some(intens) time right now so I can be a little smartass here:
If you have an left align text there should always be a long line, than a short line, than a long line, than a short line and so on - this makes better reading.
also if you have a new paragraph in the text don't do this big gaps that's a pattern from a secretary with a typewriter. Smaller gaps do also the job and makes a better flow in reading.
hope this was any help.
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| Posted: Sun Jun 20, 2004 1:28 am |
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Amazing stuff!
This is so nice eyewoo!
I would like to see that horizon have a dense (enviromental fog) formation of hills made with costum clothing! 
By the way...
Do you just paint all the creatures randomly as they come into notion.
Or did you make a whole lot of concepting on possible creatures before starting the bookart?
keep it up.
cheers.
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