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PostPosted: Fri Jun 11, 2004 10:43 pm     Reply with quote
I call it finished for now, anyway. Was trying for that sunlight in a dusty room feel.



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PostPosted: Sat Jun 12, 2004 12:30 am     Reply with quote
i really like the girl and the window, but i think the rest of the background looks kinda rushed and hazy in places, particularly the arches. also, with the window, you might want to think about how the light coming through the window would effect the window itself. i don't think the black lines would all be that strong, and its a little distracting.

i think you got what you were going for pretty well though, really nice job!
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