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I Need Critque...Please  Im New To This Site And Im Think Im Kinda Lacking Something Alittle Assistance... |
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| Posted: Mon Jun 07, 2004 6:13 am |
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Heh, I'm not much into robots, but I think this one looks very good! Such a nice pastel shades, I woudln't know what you should change there.  |
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| Posted: Mon Jun 07, 2004 12:24 pm |
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Umm..Im Trying A Different Approach/Style At Things Right Now....I Dont Think It Came Out That Great...  Critique Please... |
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| Posted: Tue Jun 08, 2004 1:35 am |
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I really like your second painting. If you want any crits, well, I can only say the leters distract a little, and from a composition point of view I'll place them in the lower right corner instead, but that's just a matter of taste.
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| Posted: Tue Jun 08, 2004 5:44 am |
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Oh Man..I just noticed that her shadow shouldnt be right under her....because the light position...damnit..
Ragnarok:
Thank You Ill take that into consideration.. |
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| Posted: Tue Jun 08, 2004 12:00 pm |
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the second image:
I don't like the transparent text stuff, it really looks werid together with the rest of the image
also, that big shadow of a man seams like it's supposed to be an important part of the image, but it's too light atm. I also think the size of the shadow makes it hard to understand |
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| Posted: Tue Jun 08, 2004 5:59 pm |
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hey Sorry, hope you don't mind an overpaint on ur 2nd image.. been working a lot with shadows lately and thought i'd try a quick fix just to see how it looked... i like the design of it, and the little girl... i think if you got the shadows right, it'd add a lot to the overall feeling!
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| Posted: Wed Jun 09, 2004 5:56 am |
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| bjotto wrote: |
the second image:
I don't like the transparent text stuff, it really looks werid together with the rest of the image
also, that big shadow of a man seams like it's supposed to be an important part of the image, but it's too light atm. I also think the size of the shadow makes it hard to understand |
Yes you are quite...right...good observation i didnt quite pick that up...i guess this picture will need some more work...Thank you Bjotto.
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The Shadows Need Some Cleaning Up To Do..On that i would love to see them cleaned up a bit. |
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| Posted: Wed Jun 09, 2004 11:41 am |
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I was going for a toony like kinda look i was wondering if there is anything i can do to make this better...Sorry For The Bad Rendering |
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| Posted: Thu Jun 10, 2004 9:59 am |
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I Figured I Would Have To Come Up With An Idea Of My Own To Make My Picture Look Better So I Thought Of This....How's It Look..(Bad Rendering) |
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| Posted: Thu Jun 10, 2004 10:05 am |
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Woooow, Sorry! I really really like it!  And the rendering is GOOD!
Say you dit it all in Photoshop, didn't you? |
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| Posted: Thu Jun 10, 2004 10:07 am |
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| Ya And Illistrator..I Took Advice And Didnt Put A Signiture lol.. |
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| Posted: Thu Jun 10, 2004 10:11 am |
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| *g* Well, I do can imagine it looks better without. Your signature jumped in the eyes very much... So really, good job! |
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| Posted: Mon Jun 14, 2004 11:08 am |
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Are you some kind of idiot, do you really think you could take a pic done by samwise and have ppl think it's your own???
For all of you ppl who tough he did it, have a look at this:
http://www.sonsofthestorm.com/warcraft_samwise027c.html#gallery
It's the sons of the storm website, the artists from blizzard entertainement. Samwise the Panda King did that pic, not this guy.
IT'S A CRIME TO STEAL ART AND NOT CONSIDER THE COPYRIGHTS!!!!!!
Ban this guy plz
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| Posted: Mon Jun 14, 2004 8:28 pm |
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| Posted: Wed Jun 16, 2004 6:27 am |
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im no real artist but it was obvious he didnt do any of those... look at the robot pic, beneath his transparent like sig is what appears to be the real sig in black writing?
that floating sorry text just looks out of it as well, like it has no place in the composition and seems thrown in real badly, not to mention the severe change of style through the pics
pretty lame mate, gl hf in life
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