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James Smith
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 Posted: Sat Jun 05, 2004 8:56 am |
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Two new pics! Feel free to tear 'em apart.  LOL  Would anyone like to to color them? Check the website for much more!!!
http://hometooled.com/index2.html
Thanks!!
James Smith
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Jaamc
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| Posted: Sat Jun 05, 2004 9:20 am |
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Anatomically both women look a bit too "cowgirlish" for my taste, with their curved legs. In the second pic the gun should really be a bit more perspectively, instead plainly from side. No more really obvious flaws, I think...
Generally I like how you've drawn the arms in the pics, but now that I started to look at them, the mans hand on the top pic is quite grotesgue (spelling?)
Otherwise I mostly like the balance between shadows and highlights, especially if these are intended to be coloured. |
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Capt. Fred
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| Posted: Sat Jun 05, 2004 9:59 am |
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the legs are far to deformed for my taste, horrendously deformed.
I like the images just fine though.
In general, I prefer less 'bulbous' drawing of people, and more coordinated looking. But that isn't really a criticism, it's just my taste. |
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Al Ian
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Simoom
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| Posted: Sat Jun 05, 2004 7:51 pm |
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| the girl in the first picture is holding that gun extremely awkwardly, it kinda looks like she's shooting herself in the boob. |
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