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scallywag
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PostPosted: Wed Jun 09, 2004 9:50 am     Reply with quote
Hi all, I'm just about ready to draw a line under this one. Could you point out anything that jumps out at you that I've missed or could improve?

Ta.

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PostPosted: Wed Jun 09, 2004 3:30 pm     Reply with quote
Shouldn't the teddy bear have an ear or two?

I think the separation/values between the light and shadows could be greater. The shadow on the wall is almost as bright as the lit area....
Other than that, neat little picture.
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PostPosted: Thu Jun 10, 2004 1:52 pm     Reply with quote
Ahh, thanks henrik - I tried that, looks better imo (but my original host has died for some reason so you can't compare right now, grrr). New version:

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