[thewreck]

hey, ive posted some strange stuff here before, but alas, everyone, yes even me will post something serious given enough time, so here it is,

a police woman, done from scratch in ps with mouse.

what im hoping now is that someone with awsome coloring skills will grab ahold of this one and feel it up! so, have fun!

it comes in four versions, the 25% version .jpg, the full 4000x3000 .gif version, and the full .png version. and finally, the layerd psd version for those who prefer that.



http://members.chello.se/daniel.brynolf/policewomanfull.gif

http://members.chello.se/daniel.brynolf/policewomanfull.png

http://members.chello.se/daniel.brynolf/policewomanfull.psd


hope to see some nice colorings, ill sit down and make one myself too!

and ofcourse c&c welcome,
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[Al Ian]

You might get some people who will color this. However the anatomy problems in the woman keep me from wanting to make the attempt. Her varios body parts dont match with the rest of her body parts.
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[thewreck]

hmm, yes im aware of some, it would be helpful if you could be a little more specific,

aware of that the left foot isnt corretly rotated, the right hand is too small, the right hip might be too long. if you noticed anything else, it would be great.
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[DeadbeaT]

Im sorry to say but Al Ian should'nt need to be more specific, you should get someone to pose for you and then compare against your drawing. using a mouse can be wee-bit of a challenge, especially on linework..

but since you asked for more specific anatomy issues:

starting from top:

- face, to me it seems she has a "monkey" face with everything below the nose too far forward

- her neck is too far forward as well or too thick, depending on how you want t too be

- her right shoulder looks like its made of rubber, i have difficulties imagining a shoulder bone under thet curve.

-her left arm (and propably right too) is too thin compared to her body, har left hand is way too small.

-the gun is pretty well done, except that i think the scope is a bit off, and that her right hand is too small also.

- *WARNING: corny remark* her tits are saggy, with that face and those tits she reminds me more of a office clerk than a police woman, then again not all police women needs to be sex symbols... or do they?

- her stomage is a curve outwards? wtf, mate? not even if she had a belly would it curve like that... it should follow the "back-line" more

-which leads us to the hips, when you have fixed the stomage you will realise that the cruve wil lead staight to her groin or so so that you could just ad s curve outside of that line in propper height to get a well rounded, female hip.

-her right leg is too thin and not proportional with her left

-her left leg get too thin by the knee

-the rest of the foot (knees -> down) are too small compared to the rest of the body

also concerning details: that speaker she had up by her mouth kinda makes it lok like a corner tooth sticking out of her mouth and that the rest of har speaker looks like a curve upward of her mouth, this gives her a sort of trollish-grin

-if shes wearing clothes under that west of hers (and i suppose she does since she's a cop and she's chasing criminals, catching bullets and so on, maybe give her a kewlar? (son't want any street punk to cut up that little west of her with his brand new knife... that could be embarasing) her breast would not be so ...eh, individual?...



OOOOOOOOOOOOkay, im so sorry im pointing out all these small things that you could have done better, hopefully you wont stare at the picture and go " fuck that" and delete it. (i usually do when i get critique, but then again im a cranky young fool ) Instead look at the points ive pointed out and see if you understand what i mean (and if you actually understand my bad english i'd be suprised) and then try to correct things and feel your way through it.

Maybe you should try working with general shapes and sketches more? just to get a good feel of human anatomy... anyway good luck!
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[thewreck]

right, ive looked through your points and they are all true, its like i go, read, look, and ahhh, of course, cause when u draw a picture for too long you become blinded, like making music for too long,

anyway, those points are indeed helpful, and are appriciated.
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