[Mega Muffin]

Hi I'm in high school and am slowly getting better at art. I'd really appreciate some tips on this design for my school's homecoming t-shirt. The head on the guy is similar to the head of our mascot, just with a different facial expression. Orange is one of our schools colors. The theme for the dance is a world tour. Again, I would really appreciate any help. I'm trying to stay away from the edges because I don't want it to look like its cut off in a box like shape on the shirt, just that it flows. Here it is.

[aphelionart]

coolness... much better than my HC tshirt was (30 airbrushed names.. XXXL.. jesus)

it might seem cheap/not go w/the drawing, but what about using the lighting effects filter for the spotlights? and maybe somehow fit some sparkle into 'world tour' and the guy's clothes to give it that blinding glamour rock feel. right now he seems ready for the stage but his lighting crew seems a tad bit mellowed out! just some thoughts-out-loud..
-matt

[Mega Muffin]

thanks for the comments! I'll try adding some more glitter to it. I agree that it would improve the overall feel. Converting it to a gif file sort of faded some of the color though. Here's part of the back. Each class picked a city and I am drawing our mascot from each of those places. The second one is supposed to be from Beijing. I'm going to add a chinese dragon coming out of the shadows so it will be more reckognizable. Comments/Crit for this one?

[Mega Muffin]

I changed the front a bit, to make the lettering stand out more and stuff. What do you all think? I would really appreciate comments. Also, if you want to see the whole thing go to the link: http://www.geocities.com/jesta125/HomecomingTeeFront.txt
cuz I know its a big pic.