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Mark Branscum junior member
Member # Joined: 22 Oct 2002 Posts: 33 Location: OK
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Posted: Thu May 06, 2004 12:23 pm |
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I thought I would start posting again as it has been awhile and I have been quite busy working. But here is a WIP and I am showing some step by steps.
The last image will show its stage that it is in right now.
Enjoy! But I warn you this is not Dial up friendly. I cut this file down from a 20mb file to a 197k file I did not feel I could could compress it further without loosing detail. I hope this is ok.
This first image is a step by Step while the second image is the present stage it is in.
Note if you have looked at this file earlier today yo will notice I made a correction much needed but now She is happy for it
Tell me what do you think so far? I know I am really satisfied with the present stage of the work in progress!
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Mark Branscum junior member
Member # Joined: 22 Oct 2002 Posts: 33 Location: OK
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Posted: Fri May 07, 2004 3:58 pm |
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I just wanted to note I have done a complete overhaul on this pic. My appologies for so many errors, mainly fundamental drawing errors. I must have been extremely tired or something, but really I dont want to make an excuse I should have followed my steps better and caught the errors before ever moving forward with the detail.
Anyway, I am in hopes of some response from the community.
MBStudios
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bagelguillotine junior member
Member # Joined: 18 Apr 2004 Posts: 40 Location: Philadelphia, USA
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Posted: Fri May 07, 2004 6:18 pm |
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Nice work. I'd say you definitely know what you're doing. I'm assuming this was done from a reference picture? The only crit I have is that certain areas of the face seem to lack concrete structure. Particularly, I'm looking at the bridge of the nose and her right cheek. Maybe the crease between the nose and the corners of the mouth is a little exaggerated? Her right eye looks like it's strayed a bit from where it was in the first draft you've posted. Really well done, anyway. That hair is certainly impressive. |
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