[two-na]

Hello, the sijun forums rock. I have learned a great deal thanks to these forums.
Originally this was drawn in oekaki-bbs

I want the light to be coming from directly 10am, or nearly directly above..
Can you please help, and also what should I do--I do not know--I would like to see a reflection on the concrete on top of this carrier as well, should I use a textured brush with low opacity that is a low-value high-saturated color?


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[V Shane]

Well, even if the Jet was moving, to be this blurry you would have to have a really slow shutter setting. Also the guy on the ground is stationary, so he should be sharper anyway. I did a little paint over showing how you could enhance at least the lighting a little bit. But its so blurry, I couldn't detail to much as that would be an immense amount of work.

Even moving detail would be highly visible and maybe jsut the tail end would require a photoshop "motion blur". Hope this helps somewhat.


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[two-na]

thanks for the killer comment--I have examined your advice and here is what I have come up with


I was trying to figure out how to do the texture for the ground so I looked at spooge's blue_coat drawing, however I think he added an extra step in the process, not to mention he is far more experienced than I.. anyway, I don't think I am finished yet, the details aren't going to be my concern, I am just trying to keep to a realistic and fun feel, see ya
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