[koshime]

I wanted to paint some weird structures in a landfill of sorts (why landfill, dont ask me why but it only became obviosu after various forms developed against the sky)

The pinkish white structure serves as a fantasy mass transit system
To the far left is a equivalent of factory smoke stacks

Any suggestions for improving the overall foreground and picture would be welcome


_________________
Koshime

[Nathan]

Wow, those are some nice forms. I like it. I'd suggest working out the lighting a bit more, it seems kinda scattered and disorganized right now. Your atmosphere is really quite good. The foreground needs work, but that's probably not the focus of interest so don't over-do it. I would not be able to tell that that's a landfill if you didn't tell me, so maybe try to make that a bit more obvious. Keep going with this!

[koshime]

I'll try adding some shafts of light and see if that changes the mode of focus, and adding more groudn smog/pollution
_________________
Koshime

[ddawghurl]

outstanding. really great. even though i couldn't tell it was a landfill, you get the feeling of it being dirty and in a city, but something grand above it. i like it a lot. keep up the great work
_________________