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Heysoos
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 17, 2004 8:54 pm     Reply with quote
made in photoshop. Give me some critiquetivity.




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SolarC
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PostPosted: Sun Apr 18, 2004 3:36 am     Reply with quote
Hehe, nice going there. Only crit I can think of is that the player seems to be a bit unbalanced to be sitting in the chair of that position or maybe the chair is rather a bit wrong place, because the pose is otherwise nice.
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Heysoos
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PostPosted: Tue Apr 20, 2004 12:07 pm     Reply with quote
thanks solarc, yeah I see what your sayin, maybe if I give him a bit more curve to his back he'll seem mo' balanced.

give me some feedback folks so I can fix this sucka' up.
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fae
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PostPosted: Wed Apr 21, 2004 7:07 pm     Reply with quote
ahh cool pic! the style is awesome... and it just... says so much...

i love how you have that repeatedness in the finger stuff... (sorry my descriptions suck! hehe) it really adds motion and makes it seem like he's a dramatic music player!!!
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Summer Pudding
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PostPosted: Thu Apr 22, 2004 11:35 am     Reply with quote
Heysoos,

I find the hand trails too distracting, and the treatment of the floor too loose. Great figure though.

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