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alti
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any suggestions ? /saber colour textures /
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alti
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| Posted: Thu Apr 01, 2004 9:06 am |
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still rough but taking some more shape- |
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Heysoos
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| Posted: Thu Apr 01, 2004 2:20 pm |
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| the main problem I see is that the figure doesn't fit into the perspective of the environment at all. It looks like hes pasted on top of it. Another thing is that as of now the most eyecatching, contrasty part of the piece is where the sky breaks through the buildings, your eye immediately goes there and I don't think that is where you want your focal point. |
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Wiked Ewok
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| Posted: Sun Apr 04, 2004 7:45 pm |
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nice, took a while to read the perspective. Doesn't seem that uniform, example, the building right in back of the jedi has sides which seem to be parallel, then the building to the right in back of it suddenly has a vertical side. The side clostest to you (of the big building ) should be more vertical? and its other side to the right should tilt to the right, not the left? Sorry..not explaining well. But it's a nice piece. I like it, especially the Jedi's suit.
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