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HungerArtist
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PostPosted: Sun Mar 21, 2004 6:29 pm     Reply with quote
please let me know if you find any of these particularly striking, or have advice on what I could do to improve 'em.



















thanks!
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GardenGnome
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PostPosted: Sun Mar 21, 2004 9:36 pm     Reply with quote
I really like them man, no crits though.
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Wagner
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PostPosted: Mon Mar 22, 2004 1:49 pm     Reply with quote
my favorites are the second and third ones, they're realy neat
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Warhead82
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PostPosted: Thu Mar 25, 2004 11:40 am     Reply with quote
half of them is hard to tell sort of what they are, cause it kind of looks like you paint pretty messy, just try cleaning them up a little bit, unless these arent finished and you are already going to do that? nice work tho.
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Summer Pudding
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PostPosted: Thu Mar 25, 2004 2:56 pm     Reply with quote
What are these doing in the Work in Progress section? Adding to them would spoil them.

Bird mask, staff of Ra figure, girl with heart on a card and sword wielding girl are wonderful.

Flightless bird at sunset is astounding. I love it. Reminds me of one of my favourite artists, Odilon Redon.

http://www.artmagick.com/artists/redon.aspx

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Griff_Zero
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PostPosted: Mon Mar 29, 2004 11:12 pm     Reply with quote
These look really awesome! After seeing them I went to your web site and looked at all your art, really nice stuff. You have a great style! Honestly, I find it hard to critique your work because you have a style that lends itself to hiding mistakes. Which isnt bad! It is actually nice to see an artist break away from the mainstream type of art. If there is one thing that I notice, the girl with the valentine card, her arms are a little outta proportion. They seem to be really long. The elbow bends just above the bottom of the rib cage, in the picture they are bending at her waist. Anyway, all I have to say is keep it up, cause they look great.
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