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Keating
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 Posted: Thu Mar 11, 2004 1:53 am |
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here's something I did last night for a Contest on another Forum. I'm not really happy with what the Werewolf is doing, it didn't work out how I'd hoped. Anyway, it doesn't really matter too much, it was mostly done for fun. Let me know what you think. All crits and comments are welcome 
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The Electric Monk
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| Posted: Thu Mar 11, 2004 2:46 am |
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The blast from the vampire's gun bothers me, too sharp maybe?
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Keating
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| Posted: Sat Mar 13, 2004 1:52 pm |
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I didn't like a few parts of the piece so I edited them slightly and here's a new version
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ittybad
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| Posted: Tue Mar 16, 2004 10:21 pm |
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great change....perhaps more detail on the wolf's hand? eh, maybe not. What I would look into though is your light sources...the chest of the vamp is all lit up, but the back of the wolf is not....and the main light seems to be comming from behind the vamp....so this should kinda darken him in a siluet. But, it still works the way it is.
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