[Keating]

Not sure where I was going with this pic, it was mostly just practice for reflected light and it go out of hand. Anyway, let me know what you think, all crits and comments are appreciated


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[the_insider]

generally i like it...i like the idea..the lighting though in some parts looks a little over done. the left hand has an extreme, drastic change from the light to the shadow. I like the folds of the dress until my eyes reach the bottom of it. I dunno, just looks kinda stiff,...not clothy enough...the torso and arms in the shade look kind of flat in comparison to the rest of the image...good work though
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[Summer Pudding]

I'm surprised this one didn't get more replies. It's great. Overall, the lighting is excellent, but there are places where it is not so convincing. I don't think the shadows visible beneath the dress would be so dark. If it is a gauzy material perhaps a lighter shadow would work better.

A minor point, but hey, what do I know?

Pud'

[Matthew]

wuw, the cloth on the head with the green and orange is superb and candy in my eyes mmmm. Be careful with the perspective in the back with the chess painted floor cause that disturbs the depth a bit. Otherwise I like this piece, especially from the middle section up to the top, magic rendering there.

see you
Matthew

[Keating]

Thanks for the comments guys. I appreciate them. I can see the problem you guy are having with the bottom of the dress as well as the floor perspective. Thanks for taking the time to crit.
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