[marzsolt]

Hy there everybody!

I'm working on my first webpage ever...it's worth to throw an eye on it!

I'm expecting a lot of critix...so don't hesitate and tell me what do you think about a few hours work...

the address is:

http://marzsolt.tripod.com

thanx, and waiting for your feedback!

[Wagner]

thats realy great for a first website!

the menus on the main page don't need the "my" in them. just say "grafix" "music" other"

also, add an alternative non-flash site for those who don't use flash ( I think around 10% of people online don't have flash)

the titles of your pages need work, instead of mainPage, try Marzsolt- Home, that way when somebody bookmarks your page they will know what site it is and where in the site it is from seeing the title of the page.

the scrollbar is clunky, try to make it smoother if you can.

make sure to list updates somewhere. maybe you could have a high tech looking line coming off of whichever section was updated saying "updated: March 5th 2004" or something like that so people know when things happen.

http://www.godaddy.com/ sells domain names for a low price, and it is a well established site. buy your own domain name and your own hosting, it will make it easier to remember your site, and will make the site look cooler having it's own name, and not having ads.

That's a realy nice looking site, I hope you get alot of visitors .

[marzsolt]

Thanx thanx and thanx!

It helped me pretty much...I even updated!

I couldn't take those my's out...it would have been a hell lot of work...

Thanx again for your advice!
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