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g a m m o n
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 Posted: Wed Mar 10, 2004 9:31 am |
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This is a comic for an intro to sequential class I have. I finished over the course of a couple of days. When the deadline came I had to color the last 3 pages in one day! O_O; I hurt...
I am not very pleased with some of the colors. The only parts I like are panel 3 on page 1, page 2, and the bottom of page 3. Lemme know what you think! If you have any advice on color please help! I need it. If you can, please do a paint over. Enjoy.
Oh and excuse the ULTRA shitty, cover page. I HAD to make one so I plopped this one in 10 minutes.
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varg
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| Posted: Wed Mar 10, 2004 10:35 am |
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some of this looks realy good,and then i realy mean it.
but some panels in page 3 and 4 looks rather strage...
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g a m m o n
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| Posted: Wed Mar 10, 2004 11:23 am |
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| Thanks. There are definitely many problems with the color, staging, and frame layout. Plus the bubbles look shitty. O_O |
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| Posted: Wed Mar 10, 2004 12:42 pm |
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| you can make premade bubble brushes and just put them on a new layer. |
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Al Ian
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| Posted: Wed Mar 10, 2004 5:00 pm |
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Coloring and Line Art are great!!
The text font is difficult to read.
Also the action scene's lack dynamics. Bland/flat compositions. Try to think of funky more exadurated angles for intence frames.
Looks good overall!
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