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[YOYO] junior member
Member # Joined: 23 Dec 2003 Posts: 18
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varg member
Member # Joined: 23 Jun 2003 Posts: 192 Location: sweden
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Posted: Mon Feb 23, 2004 7:57 am |
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hup!! good,like your style... _________________ "They didnt gave me a name,just a number when I was young" |
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JL junior member
Member # Joined: 10 Feb 2001 Posts: 14 Location: Providence, RI, USA
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Posted: Mon Feb 23, 2004 10:41 am |
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I like the style... very clean. I think the perspective of the character differs a little from the background, which is a pity, since you obviously put a lot of effort into making the background perspective accurate. I don't think you shouldbe able to see the bottom of the shoe, for instance, or as much up the shirt/skirt. |
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Teeb Thoj junior member
Member # Joined: 17 Feb 2004 Posts: 24 Location: Minnesota, USA
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Posted: Mon Feb 23, 2004 1:26 pm |
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I like the variation of the line weight to emphasize the figure. The background looks good, at least to me it seemed like you didn't half ass it (I have problems with that). Well done. |
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[YOYO] junior member
Member # Joined: 23 Dec 2003 Posts: 18
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Halliday junior member
Member # Joined: 23 Feb 2004 Posts: 9
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Posted: Mon Feb 23, 2004 8:27 pm |
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Beauty linework, and I like your clean layout, and that the perspective is set up to lead the eye into the character (all lines lead to her). My only real critism is that the proportion of the upper body doesnt' seem to match the lower. The pelvis seems a little small. Other than that, it's beauty. I wish I could draw this clean. _________________ "...because it's coooooooool."
"Mmmm-hmmmm." |
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