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[YOYO]
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PostPosted: Sun Feb 22, 2004 4:56 pm     Reply with quote
Uummm...never got around to cleaning it up or colouring this drawing. So decided to share it the way it is.


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PostPosted: Mon Feb 23, 2004 7:57 am     Reply with quote
hup!! good,like your style...
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PostPosted: Mon Feb 23, 2004 10:41 am     Reply with quote
I like the style... very clean. I think the perspective of the character differs a little from the background, which is a pity, since you obviously put a lot of effort into making the background perspective accurate. I don't think you shouldbe able to see the bottom of the shoe, for instance, or as much up the shirt/skirt.
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PostPosted: Mon Feb 23, 2004 1:26 pm     Reply with quote
I like the variation of the line weight to emphasize the figure. The background looks good, at least to me it seemed like you didn't half ass it (I have problems with that). Well done.
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PostPosted: Mon Feb 23, 2004 7:45 pm     Reply with quote
Thanks for the comments. I was kinda going for rounded tips on the shoes thats why you can see under them.

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PostPosted: Mon Feb 23, 2004 8:27 pm     Reply with quote
Beauty linework, and I like your clean layout, and that the perspective is set up to lead the eye into the character (all lines lead to her). My only real critism is that the proportion of the upper body doesnt' seem to match the lower. The pelvis seems a little small. Other than that, it's beauty. I wish I could draw this clean.
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