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StewartStudio
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PostPosted: Mon Feb 16, 2004 10:49 am     Reply with quote
Here is my 2 latest illustrations. Tell me what you think. I made some changes to the 2 little dragons from my last post and I lightened the sky.
It looks better.




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PostPosted: Wed Feb 18, 2004 8:00 pm     Reply with quote
in the first pic, the girls legs seem bent out of place... they bend just a LITTLE far... ouch.

the bg looks neat - the building and the mountains

the proportions on the girl in the second one are also off. maybe doing more life drawing would help a lot for that =)

again neat bg, and neat tree. maybe make the shadows more dramatic since the lighting is fairly strong in the back there
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