[hunch]

A sketch


its mainly a very stylised pose practice, but if you have any terrible mistakes to point out plz do so. Remember though, its stylised



And another thing. if anyone is border enough feel free to paint over or sumfin to help me get an idea how to take this further.

CHEERS
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[neewom]

Red X

Plus, if it's stylized, we'll know. When an artist says asks the viewer to consider the style, it sounds more like an excuse than anything else. I can't see the pic, though, so I'll hold of any judgement until I see it.

Edit: Okay, I can see it now. The torso on the figure to the right looks unbalanced with the rest of the body, like it just doesn't flow right with the movement of the limbs.
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[hunch]

sorry bout i didnt mean for it to sound the way it did and for the image it should work so im confused. i can see it though.

If that doesnt work you can see it here
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and another thing if anyone has any tips on how to reduce the number of lines all over the place? Should i practice drawing in one stroke?
any tips are good
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[Heysoos]

well if you want to use these sketches and make a more clean drawing from them probably the easiest way is to just get some Graphics paper (a kind of semi transparent paper) and just draw/trace over the top of the sketch. Or if your feeling more lazy you can just do your scribbly sketch in graphite then use a pen over it then erase the graphite.

the exercise of using minimal amount of lines while drawing is a good way of training your eye to be more observant, especially when working from life, so its good to practice with that every now and then.

[hunch]

so anyone got anything to say about the actual drawing?
even though tips are always welcome
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