View previous topic :: View next topic |
Author |
Topic : "First 2004 CG" |
Wynd junior member
Member # Joined: 06 Feb 2004 Posts: 2
|
Posted: Fri Feb 06, 2004 6:58 pm |
|
![](templates/drizz/images/hrline.gif) |
It's been a long time since I completed something from sketch to CG. Anyways, this is an attempt to break away from all the static compositions that plague my site. Hopefully this is a step up. ^^
![](http://wynd.teamanime2k.org/color/color_himura.jpg) _________________ Studio Wynd
http://wynd.teamanime2k.org |
|
Back to top |
|
Tanqexe junior member
Member # Joined: 27 Oct 2003 Posts: 33 Location: Baltimore, MD
|
Posted: Fri Feb 06, 2004 7:20 pm |
|
![](templates/drizz/images/hrline.gif) |
Yay to Kenshin!
Very dynamic. Just a few things...It may just be me, but the way the arms are bent don't seem to be lining up properly with the shoulder joint sockets. This is most notable with the apparent lack of space on his right shoulder, where his deltoids should be. Also, the shading on the face can be lightened a tad bit as further contrast against his red hair and his dark blue/black attire. Might also want to tighten the darker value on his forehead; it looks like his left temple is wider than his right. |
|
Back to top |
|
The Niles Edge member
Member # Joined: 09 Mar 2002 Posts: 97 Location: Washington State, USA
|
Posted: Sun Feb 08, 2004 12:33 am |
|
![](templates/drizz/images/hrline.gif) |
yeah, i think that Tanqexe is right, it looks like he is sort of crunching his shoulders up. i just wanted to add something about the shading. i am definately not an expert on cell style shading, but i think that it would do well to have another "level" of shadow. just some darker tones to add some detail, particularly around the eyes and in some of the folds on his clothes _________________ ...be sure man that every
line drawn reflects a life that you loved
not an existence that you hated.
-Incubus |
|
Back to top |
|
fae member
Member # Joined: 07 Feb 2004 Posts: 93
|
Posted: Sun Feb 08, 2004 10:47 am |
|
![](templates/drizz/images/hrline.gif) |
very dynamic - i agree w/ the others _________________ ~a shadow, a moment, a memory-- a monument, a legend, a legacy~ |
|
Back to top |
|
Wynd junior member
Member # Joined: 06 Feb 2004 Posts: 2
|
Posted: Sun Feb 08, 2004 6:53 pm |
|
![](templates/drizz/images/hrline.gif) |
Thanks for the crits all, I'll work on implementing them. _________________ Studio Wynd
http://wynd.teamanime2k.org |
|
Back to top |
|
|