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Tanqexe
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PostPosted: Fri Feb 06, 2004 3:50 am     Reply with quote
Wow, haven't come back in so long....

http://www.deviantart.com/view/4937466/
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PostPosted: Fri Feb 06, 2004 5:47 am     Reply with quote
That's great. Fantastic sense of story.
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PostPosted: Fri Feb 06, 2004 7:51 am     Reply with quote
Thanks Sumaleth! Somehow, I'm not really satisfied with it, though...Trying to find ways to fix it.

Oh well, off to class.
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PostPosted: Fri Feb 06, 2004 11:10 am     Reply with quote
Amazing color and sense of life to this picture. It reminds me of like Escaflowne. I lvoe it Very Happy
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PostPosted: Fri Feb 06, 2004 11:43 am     Reply with quote
yeah, this pic is really cool. if you really want to change something though, the only thing i can think of is to make his hand bigger and beefier, to where he could actually reach all the way around the grip Wink. keep up the good work!
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PostPosted: Fri Feb 06, 2004 12:52 pm     Reply with quote
hey i remember the WIP of this! it looks alot better than the first v, i like how u darkened it up so much. gj!
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Tanqexe
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PostPosted: Fri Feb 06, 2004 7:27 pm     Reply with quote
The Niles Edge wrote:
yeah, this pic is really cool. if you really want to change something though, the only thing i can think of is to make his hand bigger and beefier, to where he could actually reach all the way around the grip Wink. keep up the good work!


Actually, the hand is supposed to be about that size (damn the people who made the model kits!). The easier way, I suppose, would be to redraw the hand so that his thumb and index finger is separated by the hild, and then have his fingers resting on the crossguard.

CwStone: Heh...yeah, it's been a while...glad you like the "finished" product.
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PostPosted: Fri Feb 06, 2004 9:50 pm     Reply with quote
I actually think it would have been stronger with a much lower camera angle. Way up there behind the trees seems somehow unnatural, and doesn't make the robot guy look at big as he could.
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PostPosted: Fri Feb 06, 2004 10:12 pm     Reply with quote
You're right, it would've been stronger to have a lower angle. I've been trying to work with low camera angle pieces ever since finishing this, actually; doing a 3- point perspective low-angle piece effectively is my eventual goal. There may come a time when I'll want to do a speedpaint of what this should've looked like from a lower angle...
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