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krazykrista · junior member Member # Joined: 15 Oct 2003 Posts: 44

Entry for the Epilogue Renewal contest...

Out of Despair rises Hope, as a beam of light that pushes back the darkness and unravels the clouds of fear. The rebirth of Hope is not a singular event, but one that like wildfire spreads to all it touches. And suddenly the darkness is driven out of us, and we no longer need to look to others for Hope; we find it glowing within ourselves.

(PS CS + Wacom Intuos tablet)
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godee · Posted: Thu Jan 29, 2004 11:13 pm

sick ass.... 'specially on the underlighting..
transition on the face is too sharp tho.. on the chin specificly.. should stay with the idea of morphing between the two light sources.. chin is fukt

but still.. sick ass
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krazykrista · junior member Member # Joined: 15 Oct 2003 Posts: 44

Good point. Made some changes to the face...opefully that's a little better now. Smile

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godee · Posted: Thu Jan 29, 2004 11:54 pm

yea.. thas better..
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cok3 · Posted: Thu Jan 29, 2004 11:59 pm

looks great! the dark one is awesome. but why is that twirling thing in the back blurry?

IDrawGirls · Posted: Fri Jan 30, 2004 12:57 am

I'd make his left eye less saturated ...
that the amazing right side of the face gets more attention.
The shading on the deltoid isn't as good/smooth as in the rest of the image.
IMHO.

I really love everything else about it.
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spyroteknik · Posted: Fri Jan 30, 2004 2:01 am

i think it's fantastic krista, maybe fade out the cloud from the back to give it depth? (it looks as though the white light should hit that too, confuses the eye slightly)can't think of anything i'd personally change though.