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lancefury
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 25, 2004 5:29 am     Reply with quote

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PostPosted: Sun Jan 25, 2004 2:34 pm     Reply with quote
nice lines... dig.
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lancefury
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 25, 2004 4:56 pm     Reply with quote
Thanks Godee
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 25, 2004 6:51 pm     Reply with quote
I want her!
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 26, 2004 12:36 am     Reply with quote
love it, but I have a couple of comments.

The breast on the left side of the picture should be more rounded. Even though she has what looks like a droopy boob ont eh other side, the flab of flesh that is the breast is rounded and will look so from the side.

and second of all, where's the rest of her arm on the same side as the breast I just mentioned? You have shoulder and then nothing else?
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 26, 2004 3:25 pm     Reply with quote
Thanks Faeklone, here' s the new pic...

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PostPosted: Tue Jan 27, 2004 7:19 pm     Reply with quote
Nice. I like it.

Just noticed something, the leg on the same side is a little small length wise and a little big muscle wise in comparrison to the other side. Maybe while you draw it, add a little indication of the hip and the muscle on the outside of the hip that connects it tot he leg. You have it on the other side, and I think it should make the picture balance nicely. And draw in the foot, or put in a shadow on that leg, cause if you look at her, it looks like she's closer to the ground on that leg versus the other leg.
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